Our national team will attend to the World Cup South Africa 2010, was the first time that we win in official games played in the country of coffee (Colombia) against their football selection. With this victory Chile classified to the SOUTH AFRICA 2010 (the most important sport competition in the world).
This event is very important for Chile and for our continent, because we have proven to be good in this sport, everywhere people talk about it, is the topic required in every meeting. Also this team generates happyness and pride, because this players are people like us, they are a true reflection.
In this process is very important the technical, Marcelo Bielsa, he made a revolution in our soccer, he always tries to attack, passing above rivals, makes many goals, without speculate. Also he introduce discipline in a team which was characterized by acts of indiscipline and he teachs the value of hard work. Everyone is believing again in the national team.
I like the offensive players, they need to be focus and play well during all the match, one mistake and the work of all team can collapse, they can appear ten minutes, make a gol and be heroes. Some players that I like are: ALEXIS SANCHEZ, HUMBERTO SUAZO, and JORGE VALDIVIA, they are noted for being fast and effective.
I don't want to go to Southafrica because I prefer doing a barbeque in my home with my homies and my family. Thats the magic of watching the chilean matches.
Good Rodolfo,
ResponderEliminarThe only thing is that you still have to be careful about when your sentence needs a subject or identifying when it already has one. For example, in your introductory paragraph, "Our national team will attend to the World Cup South Africa 2010, was the first time that we win in official games played in the country of coffee ..." In this case you need to say; "IT IS the first time that we win an official game..."
ALSO, IN " because we have proven to be good in this sport, everywhere people talk about it, is the topic required in every meeting."
You say, "IT is the topic required in every meeting."
This is the marking criteria:
Task: All aspects of the task are very well handled. 3 points.
Lexis: Good use of lexical resources /Coherence generally well handled.2.5 points
Grammar is adequate despite minor errors. 2 points
Score: 7.5 points. Grade: 6.0 -1 (late assignment)
FINAL GRADE: 5.0